ext_73424 ([identity profile] prog.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] prog 2008-08-11 09:25 pm (UTC)

Re: great synopsis

I was drawing on the scene where he visits his childhood home - the matching illustration (after you complete the puzzle) shows him looking in on his old bedroom, which contains some old 1970s/1980s-era computer stuff, among other things.

The prose doesn't explicitly say "he fondly remembered playing Nintendo for hours" or anything, but it seemed to fit well regardless.

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