Looking for personal bizcard feedback

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Threw this together at moo.com this evening; it's a concept for a personal bizcard, something I can use when I want to represent myself outside of Appleseed or Volity contexts. Looking for feedback on the image and the text content; I'm aware the text itself is too plain and the image is wobbly lookin in this preview. (Blame moo's layout thingy - it was useful enough for this mockup.)



It's playing on the "three personal tags" idea that I first picked up at BarCamp in April. I've settled on these three as a good summary of my primary interests and activities at present, even though I'm not solid on the wording. Currently choosing "Game Studies" over "Ludology" and "Homebrew Television" over "DIY Television".

Thoughts?

Comments

[dictator555.livejournal.com]

I kind of agree with the "Game Studies" comments being made. It seems too academic. There are people with degrees and credentials in game studies, like anthropologists and economists. Although a quick google search does seem to indicate the word has been co-opted by pop culture... so, maybe you're right to use it. It might still be confusing to the lay person, if that matters to you.

Anyway, I hate the gray. Is that OK to say? It seems so static. I disagree with everyone saying "break up the image" though. I think the cards provide a nice focal point. The programming is slightly obstructed by the cards and tape. But maybe that's OK with you, since this is more a personal business card.

If you aren't totally happy with moo, I've used vistaprint.com for business cards and other stuff (wedding invites!) and I like their interface, products, and customer service.