It starts.

[prog]

One of many ads we've sprinkled over Google, actually. But this one has my favorite copy. Zarf wrote the last line. (Yes, it would be better with "and", but there is a 35-character-per-line limit.)

Comments

The comma seems strange.

[kyroraz.livejournal.com]

As a person who has been criticized, of course, for using commas too much, it just seems to read very strangely ...

Lie to your friends -- then eat them.

Well maybe. I'm not sure how those two textual pauses are different, but one feels good, the other doesn't.